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Commission for :iconsubject-k09:
Her OC Sorren

(if anyone can spot whats wrong with the legs do tell so i can fix it... ^^;)
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:iconl3monjuic3:
L3monJuic3 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012  Student General Artist
regarding the legs:
the lower part of both legs seem a tad too long, a little more so on the right leg (right leg from our perspective)
the right foot (once again from our viewpoint) feels like it needs to pushed up the canvas a bit more, because of perspective.
You might also want to put an emphasis crease where the toes bend from the rest of the foot, to show that she's on her tippy-toes (if that was what you were going for) . Right now it seems like both her feet is straight but the backs of the feet are off the ground...so she's semi-levitating i guess, which makes it look off.
I would suggest emphasizing the crease on the right foot, but to redraw the foot to be more flat on the ground.
That shadows on the ground also seem to be a tad off, but that might just be me.
(these suggestions were from my own observations, im just a junior in highschool with no formal anatomy lessons, mostly just reading books and internet charts on my free time, so it might not be right at all.)
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:iconmadiblitz:
MadiBlitz Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ahh thank you very much, originally I did have her left leg (right in out view) behind her but i couldnt get it to look correct enough, but i will try fixing it using your suggestions. Thank you for the help :)
Btw congrats on the contest ^^
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:iconl3monjuic3:
L3monJuic3 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012  Student General Artist
oh just a quick correction on my first post:
"I would suggest emphasizing the crease on the right foot, but to redraw the LEFT foot to be more flat on the ground.
That shadows on the ground also seem to be a tad off, but that might just be me. " (forgot to put in 'left')
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:iconmadiblitz:
MadiBlitz Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Alrighty, i'll keep it in mind when i can change it :)
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:iconl3monjuic3:
L3monJuic3 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012  Student General Artist
left and right from our perspective.
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:iconl3monjuic3:
L3monJuic3 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012  Student General Artist
oh yeah,and thanks for the fav on my ninja :D
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:iconmadiblitz:
MadiBlitz Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome, i really liked the action poses too those caught my attention (i have a knack for dynamic stuff)
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ArcanaHunkCamreKaenz Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012  Student Digital Artist
thats awesome really cool XD
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:iconmadiblitz:
MadiBlitz Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks ^^
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:icondeadcobra:
DeadCobra Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012
Shes nice
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:iconmadiblitz:
MadiBlitz Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
^^
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:iconmotorroach:
MotorRoach Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012
Damn, she's cute. I like her clothing style, and specially her hair style too.
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:iconmadiblitz:
MadiBlitz Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah same ^^
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:iconfatguy88:
fatguy88 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
crap im late seeing this i see the legs look alot better and i love the hair i said that before but i wanted to say it again
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:iconmadiblitz:
MadiBlitz Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lmao :P
Yeah i love the hair too
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:iconfatguy88:
fatguy88 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
^^
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:icontheoracledragon:
TheOracleDragon Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Great work!
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:iconmadiblitz:
MadiBlitz Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you ^^
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:icontheoracledragon:
TheOracleDragon Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Welcome ^_^
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:iconlirodon:
lirodon Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
... come back Mura :(
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:iconmadiblitz:
MadiBlitz Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Mura?
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:iconlirodon:
lirodon Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ask Subject, she'll know.
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:icondualomniblades:
dualomniblades Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oooh gosh! You made Sorren look so cool! The legs look perfectly fine, by the way!
Thank you so so much!
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:iconmadiblitz:
MadiBlitz Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Very happy you like it ^^
You're very welcome :glomp:
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:iconnatyhibou:
NatyHibou Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I don't see anything wrong with the legs, personally ;w;
I love this <33333
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:iconmadiblitz:
MadiBlitz Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yay CX
Thanks!
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:iconlannytorres:
Lannytorres Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012
maybe a slight curve on the right leg but you can leave it like this, 'cause she got long boots on!! Leave it, I love this drawing a LOT :D
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:iconmadiblitz:
MadiBlitz Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hehe, thanks!
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:iconlannytorres:
Lannytorres Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012
You're welcome XD
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:iconsuperhermit:
superhermit Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It screams star wars
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:iconmadiblitz:
MadiBlitz Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yupp :nod:
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:iconmortalshinobi:
mortalshinobi Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012
that's different from your regular. space age sort.
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:iconmadiblitz:
MadiBlitz Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
She originated from the Star Wars universe ^^
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:iconmortalshinobi:
mortalshinobi Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012
ah.
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:iconhybridgothica:
hybridgothica Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Very nice :)
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:iconmadiblitz:
MadiBlitz Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you ^^
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:iconhotelwong:
HotelWong Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
no flaws on legs, seems like they're right where they're supposed to be :)
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:iconmadiblitz:
MadiBlitz Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you ^^
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:iconhotelwong:
HotelWong Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
anytime :D
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:iconsaisaotome:
SaiSaotome Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012  Professional Interface Designer
really great
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:iconmadiblitz:
MadiBlitz Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
^^
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:iconkaizuto-kazama:
Kaizuto-Kazama Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012
83
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:iconmadiblitz:
MadiBlitz Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
^^
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:iconkaizuto-kazama:
Kaizuto-Kazama Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012
8D
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:iconmel-desu:
Mel-Desu Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012  Student Digital Artist
<33 She LOOKS AMAZING~~
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:iconmadiblitz:
MadiBlitz Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
^^
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xxCuteEmmyxx Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Her legs look good to me O:
Also it is nice to see u draw a girl different from MK =D
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:iconmadiblitz:
MadiBlitz Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Im glad to hear you think so, i think i re-did them about 7 times >.<
And yepp it is ^^
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:iconxxcuteemmyxx:
xxCuteEmmyxx Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
DAMN XD
Me too i can re-do something over and over until im happy with it
Good job on it =D
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