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.Commish: Subject-K09. by MadiBlitz .Commish: Subject-K09. by MadiBlitz
Commission for :iconsubject-k09:
Her OC Sorren

(if anyone can spot whats wrong with the legs do tell so i can fix it... ^^;)
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L3monJuic3 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012  Student General Artist
regarding the legs:
the lower part of both legs seem a tad too long, a little more so on the right leg (right leg from our perspective)
the right foot (once again from our viewpoint) feels like it needs to pushed up the canvas a bit more, because of perspective.
You might also want to put an emphasis crease where the toes bend from the rest of the foot, to show that she's on her tippy-toes (if that was what you were going for) . Right now it seems like both her feet is straight but the backs of the feet are off the ground...so she's semi-levitating i guess, which makes it look off.
I would suggest emphasizing the crease on the right foot, but to redraw the foot to be more flat on the ground.
That shadows on the ground also seem to be a tad off, but that might just be me.
(these suggestions were from my own observations, im just a junior in highschool with no formal anatomy lessons, mostly just reading books and internet charts on my free time, so it might not be right at all.)
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MadiBlitz Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ahh thank you very much, originally I did have her left leg (right in out view) behind her but i couldnt get it to look correct enough, but i will try fixing it using your suggestions. Thank you for the help :)
Btw congrats on the contest ^^
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L3monJuic3 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012  Student General Artist
oh just a quick correction on my first post:
"I would suggest emphasizing the crease on the right foot, but to redraw the LEFT foot to be more flat on the ground.
That shadows on the ground also seem to be a tad off, but that might just be me. " (forgot to put in 'left')
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MadiBlitz Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Alrighty, i'll keep it in mind when i can change it :)
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L3monJuic3 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012  Student General Artist
left and right from our perspective.
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L3monJuic3 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012  Student General Artist
oh yeah,and thanks for the fav on my ninja :D
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MadiBlitz Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome, i really liked the action poses too those caught my attention (i have a knack for dynamic stuff)
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ArcanaHunkCamreKaenz Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012  Student Digital Artist
thats awesome really cool XD
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MadiBlitz Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks ^^
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DeadCobra Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012
Shes nice
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