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regarding the legs:
the lower part of both legs seem a tad too long, a little more so on the right leg (right leg from our perspective)
the right foot (once again from our viewpoint) feels like it needs to pushed up the canvas a bit more, because of perspective.
You might also want to put an emphasis crease where the toes bend from the rest of the foot, to show that she's on her tippy-toes (if that was what you were going for) . Right now it seems like both her feet is straight but the backs of the feet are off the ground...so she's semi-levitating i guess, which makes it look off.
I would suggest emphasizing the crease on the right foot, but to redraw the foot to be more flat on the ground.
That shadows on the ground also seem to be a tad off, but that might just be me.
(these suggestions were from my own observations, im just a junior in highschool with no formal anatomy lessons, mostly just reading books and internet charts on my free time, so it might not be right at all.)
the lower part of both legs seem a tad too long, a little more so on the right leg (right leg from our perspective)
the right foot (once again from our viewpoint) feels like it needs to pushed up the canvas a bit more, because of perspective.
You might also want to put an emphasis crease where the toes bend from the rest of the foot, to show that she's on her tippy-toes (if that was what you were going for) . Right now it seems like both her feet is straight but the backs of the feet are off the ground...so she's semi-levitating i guess, which makes it look off.
I would suggest emphasizing the crease on the right foot, but to redraw the foot to be more flat on the ground.
That shadows on the ground also seem to be a tad off, but that might just be me.
(these suggestions were from my own observations, im just a junior in highschool with no formal anatomy lessons, mostly just reading books and internet charts on my free time, so it might not be right at all.)